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शब्दार्थः-

शबाब = खूबसूरती, सुन्दरता (beauty)
वर्का-वर्का =वरक़, एक एक पन्ना, सफ़ा (page)
ख्वाबों = सपनों (dream)
तामीर = इमारत, पूर्णता, (completion, building)
अजाब= अज़ायब, अनोखा, अजूबा, चमत्कार (Rare, Strange, Wonder)
माजी= भूतकाल, बीता हुआ समय (past)
मुक्कमिल = मुक़म्मल, पूरा, पूर्ण (complete)
हिजाब = पर्दा, रात (curtain, night, shyness)
दरकार = आवश्यकता, ज़रूरत (needed)

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मोहिन्दर जी
बहुत ही सुन्दर गज़ल है। चाहत के कई मोती बटोरे हैं आपनें और सभी बहुमूल्य। वैसे तो सभी शेर सुन्दर हैं यह मुझे विशेष पसंद आया:

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