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टाइमस्टार घडी...किशोरवा उठा जला के माचिस देखिस अपने <br />टाइमस्टार घडी माँ, बोल चार बजै माँ थोड़ टैम बाकि है<br /><br />छेद्दु चाचा करवट बदलीन कबहू दाहिने कबहूँ बाएं <br />बड़े मुस्किल माँ फिर चार बजा, कुंजरा कै मुर्गा बांग दिहिस<br /><br />औ सुरु होई गवा मेहरारुन का काम, लोटिया लैकै मैदान गईं <br />कुल्ला दातून शुरू भावा, कौनो चौउका कौउनो बर्तन औ बढ़नी झाड़ू फिरे लाग<br /><br />दुआरे किशोरवा रजुआ के साथ गोरुअन का चारा पानी करै लाग<br />एतना सब करत भये माँ साढ़े पांच बजे का सुबेर भवा <br /><br />बाल्टी लैके डब्बा लैके कौनो लोटिया लैके चला दुहै<br />रसरी लैके छान्दी बहुती बहुतिन गैया, भैसिन पर डंडा चलै लागAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08646637859491127162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-45597383849040872922013-10-09T16:44:36.246+05:302013-10-09T16:44:36.246+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08646637859491127162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-14489748083962837792013-10-09T16:41:26.585+05:302013-10-09T16:41:26.585+05:30अत्यंत सुन्दर एवं मनमोहक पंक्तियाँ लिखी आपने बधाई ...अत्यंत सुन्दर एवं मनमोहक पंक्तियाँ लिखी आपने बधाई होAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08646637859491127162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-47022997180443905272012-02-18T21:48:03.217+05:302012-02-18T21:48:03.217+05:30a very powerful poem, showing the real face of the...a very powerful poem, showing the real face of the village life. another strong point is the language used in this poem. Thanks to the dear poet.http://chandu2007.blogspot.com/https://www.blogger.com/profile/01815881280015063282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-83096155091791354612011-10-15T13:22:30.637+05:302011-10-15T13:22:30.637+05:30सरकारी व्यवस्था सुन रहे है | अखबार में पढ़ भी रहे...सरकारी व्यवस्था सुन रहे है | अखबार में पढ़ भी रहे है| कुछ समझ नहीं आता की अब क्या कहा जाय| गाँव में ये सब तो होता ही है |शहर की ओर पलायन का यह भी एक कारण है |Indu Bala Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11383239403957006475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-48927380233667262232011-08-13T19:03:51.803+05:302011-08-13T19:03:51.803+05:30this poem not fit for all gov schools nowadays. ma...this poem not fit for all gov schools nowadays. maybe u never went to see real sarkari school. sirf suni sunai baato ke aadhar par aap sabko blame nahi kar sakte. agar sarkari schools na ho to aaj bhi lakho bacche apna naam tak likhna nahi seekh payenge.a gov teachernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-17129970651339138462011-07-16T07:54:47.467+05:302011-07-16T07:54:47.467+05:30shbon ka sanyojan aur bhav dono bahut sunder hain....shbon ka sanyojan aur bhav dono bahut sunder hain.<br />bahut bahut badhai<br />rachanaRachanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15249225250149760362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-86467362819499096602011-07-15T14:56:46.782+05:302011-07-15T14:56:46.782+05:30बस, निशब्द कर दिया आपकी इस अप्रतिम रचना ने...
क्य...बस, निशब्द कर दिया आपकी इस अप्रतिम रचना ने...<br /><br />क्या कहूँ ????<br /><br />विद्रूप सत्य को जितने प्रभावशाली ढंग से आपने अभिव्यक्ति दी है....नमन आपकी लेखनी को...रंजनाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01215091193936901460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-49631712261694204172011-07-15T13:53:08.703+05:302011-07-15T13:53:08.703+05:30मन को चीर कर रख देती है ये कविता… पता नही कब तक मन...मन को चीर कर रख देती है ये कविता… पता नही कब तक मनुष्य इस दलदल से बाहर निकल पायेगा… बहुत बहुत बधाई… एक बहुत ही संवेदन शील रचना के लिये…DHARMENDRA MANNUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12605987738741931811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-31071161989568333532011-07-15T12:20:31.752+05:302011-07-15T12:20:31.752+05:30बहुत सुंदर रचना, बधाई स्वीकार कीजिए।बहुत सुंदर रचना, बधाई स्वीकार कीजिए।‘सज्जन’ धर्मेन्द्रhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02517720156886823390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-57528494302702741822011-07-14T23:33:42.094+05:302011-07-14T23:33:42.094+05:30प्रिय भाई मनीषजी,
मन प्रसन्न हो गया। आपकी कलम को ...प्रिय भाई मनीषजी,<br />मन प्रसन्न हो गया। आपकी कलम को सलाम। न केवल कथ्य के स्तर पर बल्कि शिल्प के स्तर पर भी जबरदस्त कविताएं हैं। लगातार लिखते रहिए। सही दिशा में जा रहे हैं। शैलेशजी संग्रह की तैयारी कीजिए, समीक्षा मैं लिखूंगा।प्रमोद कुमार तिवारीnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-82059587307089913642011-07-14T19:00:51.280+05:302011-07-14T19:00:51.280+05:30Very very niceVery very niceShamit Kumar Tomarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10488092387802255818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-31008489245494887082011-07-14T18:58:34.634+05:302011-07-14T18:58:34.634+05:30इस कविता के लिए मेरी भी बधाई स्वीकार हो भाई मनीष.....इस कविता के लिए मेरी भी बधाई स्वीकार हो भाई मनीष..। तुम्हारी कलम ने आज बहुत दिनो बाद झकझोरा है।<br />..वाह!देवेन्द्र पाण्डेयhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466843806711544757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30371899.post-482164147124397052011-07-14T17:00:26.787+05:302011-07-14T17:00:26.787+05:30झकझोर देने वाली सच्चाई बयान करती कविता ...झकझोर देने वाली सच्चाई बयान करती कविता ...Archana Chaojihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16725177194204665316noreply@blogger.com